In a world involving increasingly large numbers of international trades and personal conflicts,legal issue has become an essential part of the daily life for almost everyone. And possessing great knowledge in this area surely enhances the quality of living and allows one to be able to deal with various issues with the correct attitudes and find the right solution. It will undoubtedly be a great pleasure to pursue a designation in this program at Conestoga College.
Receiving complementary education in this area in Canada is not only a way to immerse in the great learning environment, but also a mean to broaden the horizon. Conestoga College has unparalleled experiences in dealing with and helping international students to achieve their goals, and this is what I highly value, as it will assist me to understand differences between the different legal systems more thoroughly. Although China is also agood place to study, for me, a person who works for one of the top 10 American law firms, the education I receive at Conestoga College is going to be extremely helpful.
As an entry level staff at XXX, the chance of advancing to a more respectable position will be greatly increased with a diploma in Office Administration –Legal from Conestoga College. The knowledge of the western legal system I obtain from Conestoga College will also allow me to serve the foreign clients that come to XXX’s branch in shanghai. I have no siblings in my family. Therefore I am responsible for taking care of my retired parents. Going back to China after I successfully graduate from the program will ease the burden of supporting my whole family.
I sincerely appreciate your time and consideration,and I look forward to hearing back from you.
PS：XXX=公司名
点评：
SP要写得合情合理，要符合每个人的自身情况，以着重突出渴望学习为主，在逻辑顺序上凸显合理性。特别要把学习放在第一来写，经济担保，回国理由都只要带到就可以了，主次要分清。
逻辑顺序按照：
1、选择的学校(及专业)
2、选择的原因(突出为什么要特定在国外学，突出在国外学比在国内学的好处)
3、按照该学习计划所带来的好处(突出将来回国后给自己带来的收益，不要仅仅写金钱，因为留在加拿大也可以赚很多，找点特殊的原因写)
4、回国的理由(要很肯定且理由很强大，写父母，要写的有情有义。关键要结合自己的具体情况，一步一步写下来。
